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Post by Pansy Parkinson on Dec 18, 2006 2:05:02 GMT -5
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Post by Hermione Granger on Dec 19, 2006 16:46:37 GMT -5
Pansy Parkinson is already in Slytherine but I see you wanted to do it so good for you. Your character is in Slytherine and says in it with this! I would just try not using as many ...'s at the end of your sentences and more periods just to make it proper grammar. Also you are missing some grammar but that's alright! Keep up the good work Mrs. Parkinson!
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